This looks really nice, i like the colors and the way you did Pepper's hair, but i think you could have drawn dirt, on Pepper's socks for example, after a fire/an explosion, people are quite dirty, even if you're awesome like them. ^^
My English teacher actually played it in class the day it came out. While everyone else was watching calmly and thinking, "Oh this looks cool!" Me: HOLY CRAP!!! WHAT IS THIS!? HOLY SHIT!!! TONY, MY BABY!!! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE!! I NEED THIS NOOOOOWWW!!!"
Everyone in my class & teacher: The looks I got were hysterical